Saturday, February 20, 2010

"This is all just so Blah Blah Blah"- More Mark Making Critques

So this time its in a group, oh goodie getting to hear others try to prattle on about my work. Out of the six they choose these three.Some of the comments for this one, was that it was aggressive, that its design was appealing because the branch like lines leads your eyes to the negative space, while itself taking up just the right amount of space. The quote that was thought to be best to go with it by the group was "princess pout rips her teeth out" because the piece resembled something painful.Some of the words used to describe this where "whimsical" and "a b bouquet of bubbles" and "first of its kind."
This last one was constantly being compared to a fire, so much for closure. but most of the comments where "the lines are bold and wispy" and "delicate with an underlining aggression" and the quote for this one was "My stocking prove my virtue"

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